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Palestine
Posted: September 9th, 2016, 9:22 pm
by the mingo
half a face stares at me
from out of a flock of birds
the bridge awaits a train
seven clear lightbulbs hang from the roof of the skull -
no flower can help now
a dark haired woman advances ahead of a brick wall
a dancer goes absolutely still in mid-pose
as hand piles on top of hand
all the way to heaven
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 13th, 2016, 12:36 pm
by mnaz
Heaven, heaven, heaven... Oh what trouble ye hath wrought...
Nice poem.
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 11:49 am
by mnaz
What I meant was...
Fuck heaven. It's not out there.
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 12:29 pm
by the mingo
mnaz wrote:What I meant was...
Fuck heaven. It's not out there.
... don't blame
that on heaven -

Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 12:55 pm
by mnaz
Why not?
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 4:03 pm
by the mingo
mnaz wrote:Why not?
... because it would be piling travesty on error - there has been enough of that for sure.
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 6:52 pm
by revolutionR
Like it....
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 15th, 2016, 9:13 pm
by the mingo
revolutionR wrote:Like it....
Thx, Rev, appreciate it
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 20th, 2016, 3:34 pm
by dadio
Fine work

Re: Palestine
Posted: September 22nd, 2016, 3:52 pm
by mnaz
the mingo wrote:... because it would be piling travesty on error - there has been enough of that for sure.
That's kind of what I meant. Which
heaven? Which side's gonna "win" the heaven wars?
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 22nd, 2016, 5:39 pm
by the mingo
dadio wrote:Fine work

Thx, Terry
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 22nd, 2016, 5:53 pm
by the mingo
mnaz wrote:the mingo wrote:... because it would be piling travesty on error - there has been enough of that for sure.
That's kind of what I meant. Which
heaven? Which side's gonna "win" the heaven wars?
I don't know.

Re: Palestine
Posted: September 22nd, 2016, 6:16 pm
by mnaz
Sorry. "Trigger" word (name), I suppose. That Palestine shit gets to me every time.
If I let it.
Re: Palestine
Posted: September 23rd, 2016, 4:16 am
by stilltrucking
let it be . . .
mother mary says
let it bleed because
G*d is on both sides
please
don't mind me
I am still crazy