Culmination

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Culmination

Post by sasha » September 10th, 2016, 4:58 pm

so competent
so self-assured
this young woman
on tv
the long-ago child
who chased kitty
with her fisher-price choo-choo
who cached her easter candy
where we could not find it
who caught frogs with me
at the vernal pool next door
who built lincoln log houses
on warm rainy days
for the efts she'd collect from the woods
this young woman
on tv
at the kennedy center
presenting her proposal
for the national mall...
was it really
she?
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Re: Culmination

Post by judih » September 10th, 2016, 10:51 pm

same kid
different dimension
no stopping now

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Re: Culmination

Post by Doreen Peri » September 11th, 2016, 12:56 am

Wonderful poem! I loved it.

And congratulations to you daughter and to you!

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Re: Culmination

Post by the mingo » September 11th, 2016, 3:32 am

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Culmination

Post by 68degrees » September 12th, 2016, 10:43 pm

Love the title. Apt.

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Re: Culmination

Post by saw » September 13th, 2016, 9:10 am

sublime recollections ....been thinking a lot along those lines..... 8)
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Re: Culmination

Post by sasha » September 13th, 2016, 4:26 pm

judih wrote:same kid
different dimension
no stopping now
Boy, ain't that the truth - at least I hope it is! She seemed so poised on TV, I caught just the barest tremble in her voice....

Doreen Peri wrote:Wonderful poem! I loved it.

And congratulations to you daughter and to you!
Thanks, glad you did, and thank you for her! All I did was proofread the slides for her.

the mingo wrote:* 8) *
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68degrees wrote:Love the title. Apt.

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Thanks, for reading and commenting - appreciated!

saw wrote:sublime recollections ....been thinking a lot along those lines..... 8)
This was the same little girl who's birth I wrote about in the Stories forum here. I have to tell myself that because of the apparent disconnect.
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Re: Culmination

Post by mnaz » September 13th, 2016, 4:29 pm

Congrats.

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Re: Culmination

Post by sasha » September 14th, 2016, 1:23 pm

mnaz wrote:Congrats.
Becky sez "thanks"
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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