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Culmination
Posted: September 10th, 2016, 4:58 pm
by sasha
so competent
so self-assured
this young woman
on tv
the long-ago child
who chased kitty
with her fisher-price choo-choo
who cached her easter candy
where we could not find it
who caught frogs with me
at the vernal pool next door
who built lincoln log houses
on warm rainy days
for the efts she'd collect from the woods
this young woman
on tv
at the kennedy center
presenting her proposal
for the national mall...
was it really
she?
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 10th, 2016, 10:51 pm
by judih
same kid
different dimension
no stopping now
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 11th, 2016, 12:56 am
by Doreen Peri
Wonderful poem! I loved it.
And congratulations to you daughter and to you!
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 11th, 2016, 3:32 am
by the mingo
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Re: Culmination
Posted: September 12th, 2016, 10:43 pm
by 68degrees
Love the title. Apt.
68degrees
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 13th, 2016, 9:10 am
by saw
sublime recollections ....been thinking a lot along those lines.....

Re: Culmination
Posted: September 13th, 2016, 4:26 pm
by sasha
judih wrote:same kid
different dimension
no stopping now
Boy, ain't that the truth - at least I hope it is! She seemed so poised on TV, I caught just the barest tremble in her voice....
Doreen Peri wrote:Wonderful poem! I loved it.
And congratulations to you daughter and to you!
Thanks, glad you did, and thank you for her! All I did was proofread the slides for her.
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68degrees wrote:Love the title. Apt.
68degrees
Thanks, for reading and commenting - appreciated!
saw wrote:sublime recollections ....been thinking a lot along those lines.....

This was the same little girl who's birth I wrote about in the Stories forum here. I have to tell myself that because of the apparent disconnect.
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 13th, 2016, 4:29 pm
by mnaz
Congrats.
Re: Culmination
Posted: September 14th, 2016, 1:23 pm
by sasha
mnaz wrote:Congrats.
Becky sez "thanks"