MOBY DICK 1973

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dadio
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MOBY DICK 1973

Post by dadio » October 20th, 2016, 12:34 pm

She lies there
on the floor
of our room
in that cheap
small hotel
in Paris.

I wonder
who else has
lain naked
on this floor
wanting sex
in the raw?
Sonya asks.

You look like
a model
for Degas,
I answer.

Come on then
Benedict
don't dither
standing there
like the Pope
at a down
town orgy,
she tells me.

I undress
taking off
my black jeans,
and tee shirt,
and boxers.

The small white
radio
in the room
oozes out
a Mozart
aria.

Now undressed
I watch her
taking in
her plump fruits
and blonde thatch.

I descend
upon her
and harpoon
her softly
(my well known
party trick),
with my young
Moby Dick.
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Re: MOBY DICK 1973

Post by saw » October 27th, 2016, 10:51 am

very nice Terry...the dialogue of a coming-of-age story....poignant and funny and real...

well done, I could see it all..........and hear it !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: MOBY DICK 1973

Post by dadio » November 2nd, 2016, 4:34 am

Thank you, saw 8)

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