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intoxicated
Posted: October 26th, 2016, 9:00 am
by ephraim crud

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no snags, no spags, no sucker punch
it is almost time for lunch
yet while the sun maintains its heat
we have mangoes at our feet
and loll and laze in luxury
with vivid fishes in the sea
and time's erased or bent and spent
conveniently yet never lent
but trundles brightly tickety-boo
billowing an orange hue
while strongholds float above the beach
and no-one cares for love or speech
until the dream within the eye
sneezes all the notions dry
Re: intoxicated
Posted: October 26th, 2016, 11:33 pm
by WIREMAN
Eye dreams truer
than the shine on
a conquistadors
legend.....Like the flow senor crud

Re: intoxicated
Posted: October 27th, 2016, 6:01 am
by ephraim crud

thank you, wireman. muchly appreciated. eph
Re: intoxicated
Posted: October 27th, 2016, 10:41 am
by saw
fluent use of rhyme....as a former Key West-er, I approve...

Re: intoxicated
Posted: November 1st, 2016, 3:10 am
by ephraim crud
thank you, saw. muchly appreciated.

eph