Beatnik came from sputnik

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revolutionR
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Beatnik came from sputnik

Post by revolutionR » November 22nd, 2016, 11:14 pm

maybe it's ironic that the word beatnik
was coined by a San Francisco newspaper reporter
as a kind of mockery I guess, that he likened them
to that early Russian space vehicle that orbited
the planet, I guess he thought those bongo
beating, turtle necked, jazz and poetry loving
weirdos were like commie space heads

I identified with beatniks because I saw a movie
that began with a beat type poet reciting his poem
when I was around twelve, it was a spoof movie
but the poem was pretty good, and for some
inexplicable reason it put a deep impression on me

I think because I was a rebel when I was a child
in the sense that I always seemed to feel at odds
with authority figures like my teachers, or some of them
I don't know what it was, I decided I was going to write
a book when I was in third grade, I only wrote a few
sentences, but that was always somewhere in my mind

It was not like I had some real talent, it was more like
I just felt like an anarchist at heart, and I wanted to say so
so when I really began trying to write poetry, it came slow
I really had to make myself do it, but reading a lot of poets
started to rub off on me, and just then I met a poet
in the town I was living in, and he showed me his writing
and it was almost like I knew him from a past life,
his poetry was strangely like some of the stuff
I had been writing, and the rest as they say is history

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Re: Beatnik came from sputnik

Post by dune » November 23rd, 2016, 6:31 pm

....."I guess he thought those bongo
beating, turtle necked, jazz and poetry loving
weirdos were like commie space heads
"

Ha. Never thought of it that way, but come to think of it, I guess you're right.

And it didn't stop there. "Nik" was appended to other words after that-- usually with some sort of perjorative connotation. Like "peacenik" for example.

I wonder if old Sputnik still up there. Or maybe it crashed long ago...

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Re: Beatnik came from sputnik

Post by revolutionR » November 23rd, 2016, 8:42 pm

And that is where the Beat writers/poets came in at the beginning of the so-called space race.

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