Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

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Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

Post by the mingo » January 15th, 2017, 9:35 am

Some guy born in 1952 said,"How can you resist harpsichord ?

what do you do when the road
disappears in mist out there
where the dead singers are ?

The Song - I've never had nor wanted a husband. I've only had wives. If I'd had a husband I could now say, "My husband used to sing this to me. He's in heaven now."

no music
like oldie -
,they have meaning,
the music today
it's just a dead end

I can still crash here right?
remember when I dropped my keys and you thought the phone was ringing?
Hahaha! Oh yeah! Haha! Get out.

ITS MY HAPPENING BABY AND IT FREAKS ME OUT, YEAH BABY YEAH

I remember: turning the radio
up loud every time the song was played -
...but now the moon is
high in january night,
≅ do i want a wizard
or a skull ?

{ 152 words, big enough for a pyramid, or a texas night ? }
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

Post by saw » January 15th, 2017, 3:17 pm

Alas poor Yorick.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

Post by the mingo » January 15th, 2017, 4:48 pm

saw wrote:Alas poor Yorick.... 8)
Yeah, I know. even kings went on talking to his skull after he was dead - I mean, whoa !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

Post by judih » January 16th, 2017, 12:47 am

a skull by any other name

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Re: Snake Coffee vs. My Good-Good Girl

Post by the mingo » January 16th, 2017, 4:00 am

judih wrote:a skull by any other name
A name by any other skull 8) - I often wonder about names, about nouns in general ... I think nouns are landscapes, verbs are vibrations, adjectives are slants or meant to indicate a certain slant to things

or

nouns are canvas - verbs are paint or, better, the color of paint and adjectives are the different colors of paint where they come up against one another

adverbs are another story altogether
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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