1:08 a.m. (the doll)

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1:08 a.m. (the doll)

Post by the mingo » February 1st, 2017, 11:46 am

Fertile juice & filthy desire. The manuscript has promise. Murder yourself upstairs in the closet then give me your house. I will plant a tree on your grave. Soon it will be 50 years old.
Yours,
1:15 a.m.
PS - The doll was a rabid surprise.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 1:08 a.m. (the doll)

Post by judih » February 1st, 2017, 11:35 pm

magic hour - each minute a juicy detail, ideas arrive with gusto
bring friends

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Re: 1:08 a.m. (the doll)

Post by mnaz » February 2nd, 2017, 4:49 am

Sounds like a page-turner.

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Re: 1:08 a.m. (the doll)

Post by the mingo » February 2nd, 2017, 4:07 pm

judih wrote:magic hour - each minute a juicy detail, ideas arrive with gusto
bring friends
Thx, judih - appreciate it 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 1:08 a.m. (the doll)

Post by the mingo » February 2nd, 2017, 4:08 pm

mnaz wrote:Sounds like a page-turner.
Thx, mnaz - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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