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mudshark
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out of the blue

Post by mudshark » April 13th, 2005, 2:29 pm

like some hungry old devil
or a man coming from years ago
with a hammer and a nail
torn out
warmed up by
cross-fires

Raarr...

how you doin',
heard you stuck around this place.


oh....btw. im that drunk norweigian who used to crash at your couches.

what a roaring bell...

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izeveryboyin
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Post by izeveryboyin » April 13th, 2005, 3:09 pm

acid and yet intriguing... cool imagery, interesting story line. Quick, concise. Telling. Good Stuff.

--k
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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