old black kettle

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saw
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old black kettle

Post by saw » April 24th, 2017, 5:22 pm

old black kettle hisses,
obnoxious roommate !
I yell at it ! ok! ok!
I'll be there in a second !
but it doesn't care, it just
keeps screaming, this
inanimate banshee...
zombie alive by fire,
chaotic molecules of water,
steamy ado, snorting like Toro
pissed at the color red
and I just continue to write...
two can play this stubborn game
so I write faster....this poem
you are reading, knowing I'm stalling,
aware that I'm a cheater
delaying the inevitable display
of the meaningless men
who write into brick walls....
Sorry....to waste your time
I very much wanted to say something
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: old black kettle

Post by judih » April 24th, 2017, 10:09 pm

technological bullies
shapes, sizes, demands
one needn't submit!

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Diana Moon Glampers
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Re: old black kettle

Post by Diana Moon Glampers » April 25th, 2017, 1:17 am

thanks for a few moments of reading pleasure 8)
really need them.


I suppose my reply to your poem was inevitable
damn those brick walls :shock:
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Re: old black kettle

Post by saw » April 25th, 2017, 9:38 am

judih, truck....thanx fer da feedback..... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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