The trouble is...

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The trouble is...

Post by Doreen Peri » June 25th, 2017, 2:37 am

The trouble is
fire on the horizon.

A new possibility
rising from behind
the mountain.

What mountain?
We have no mountain here!
That's exactly right.

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Post by saw » June 25th, 2017, 11:23 am

what is that we think we see...nice to read you, doreen...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: The trouble is...

Post by cmoore » June 25th, 2017, 12:26 pm

A real brain teaser
a lot said with little 8)

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Post by judih » June 25th, 2017, 11:16 pm

we sit
we ponder
what we?

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Post by dadio » June 26th, 2017, 4:07 am

8) Good capture.

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Post by Doreen Peri » June 26th, 2017, 2:55 pm

The trouble is,
I knew what it meant
when I wrote it.
Now, I'm puzzled by it.

:)

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Re: The trouble is...

Post by beekay » June 26th, 2017, 3:43 pm

nature's mountain
keep fires away
mountains we create
not so much

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Post by Doreen Peri » June 27th, 2017, 4:32 pm

beekay,

Yeah, maybe that was what it was about. A mountain I created that wasn't really there. I can be my own worst enemy.

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Post by the mingo » June 27th, 2017, 5:13 pm

Good to see you posting again D - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by Doreen Peri » June 27th, 2017, 5:18 pm

I wrote a poem in my head last night. It was fabulous! Best writing I've ever not written! .... This wasn't it. (Obviously)

One day, mingo... one day, I hope to write again ... I miss writing.

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Re: The trouble is...

Post by the mingo » June 27th, 2017, 5:38 pm

I sure you do - you once wielded wit as a sword and wicked in your hand it was ... miss that 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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