Cinquain for Pensioners

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beekay
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Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by beekay » July 21st, 2017, 12:50 pm

retired
morning coffee
on my porch
waving at my neighbors
driving off to work
they wave back
not meaning
it

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Re: Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by sasha » July 21st, 2017, 1:16 pm

oh yes! Each morning...

we walk,
the dog and I,
along the road and smugly
wave to neighbors still in harness
ah, freedom!
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"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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Re: Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by beekay » July 21st, 2017, 1:28 pm

Yeah, the only downside is having to get up early enough to see the mob off to work. But, it's worth it...

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Re: Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by judih » July 21st, 2017, 10:41 pm

on the porch
another coffee?
why not!

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Re: Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by saw » July 23rd, 2017, 12:03 pm

my poor tenant upstairs has to pass each morning as I read the paper in my rocking chair on the front porch....the commuters look forlorn as I'm watering my plants as well....but I gotta tell ya....I earned it !
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Re: Cinquain for Pensioners

Post by sasha » July 23rd, 2017, 1:35 pm

Yup. I can't say I miss getting up in the dark to dig my car out of a snowbank so I can drive it 25 miles along unplowed roads to a job that I hate. I've paid my dues. Laying me off 6 months shy of turning 65 - with 6 months severance! - was the best thing they ever did for me.
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"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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