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Loneliness

Posted: August 1st, 2017, 8:59 pm
by beekaay
Loneliness is not
An old man on a park bench
But an empty park bench
In the rain.

Loneliness is not
The empty gaze
Of a stranger, but
A lover who looks at you
With the eyes of a stranger.

Loneliness is not
The dim street lamp
On the darkest corner
Until she stands under it
Waiting
In the yellow circle
Of despair.

Loneliness is
A hired Santa Claus
Ringing his bell
In front of the store
Pretending not to see
Faces in chaotic crowds
Of people pretending
Not to see his
.

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 1st, 2017, 9:30 pm
by Doreen Peri
This is a terrific piece!

(Did you forget your original password and re-register .... or you're a different beekay? ;) )

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 1st, 2017, 11:47 pm
by judih
lots of beekaaaays! the more the better

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 2nd, 2017, 6:52 am
by leafsailors ghost
Yes , this is a fine poem ,it builds to a deep feeling, approaching those dark hours that we all experience at some time, and holding us there just long enough to want to shake it off , this brings appreciation for friends and family , light and laughter . The work of a true poet reminding me again why I read.

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 2nd, 2017, 9:01 am
by beekaay
Thanks, Doreen, judih, leafsailors ghost. I wasn't off that long, but it seemed like forever. Good to be back!

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 2nd, 2017, 10:09 am
by saw
well done....fine imagery with a lasting impression

Re: Loneliness

Posted: August 6th, 2017, 5:14 pm
by justwalt
You know too much
beautiful
Peace

Re: Loneliness

Posted: September 21st, 2017, 10:12 pm
by Ann Bingham
This is lovely. I was looking in the photography section and saw the photo; I'm glad I sought out the poem.

Re: Loneliness

Posted: September 22nd, 2017, 7:36 am
by WIREMAN
Thought provoking for sure😎