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saw
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Post by saw » August 9th, 2017, 10:22 am

why would a man
play his stand-up bass
til there was a blister,
a raised pouch of fluid
forced into a bubble of skin
by obsessive behavior

it would seem
after so very many years
on the planet, a man
would know better
than to deliberately
hurt himself

so, I've learned nothing
I've lived and breathed
and abused myself so often
it seems like normal to me
I've jumped from the rim
into the canyon to see if I could fly
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: normal

Post by leafsailors ghost » August 9th, 2017, 9:50 pm

by these standards I am normal also , but then, who will know those wonderful ( but fleeting) moments of flight. if they do not jump?

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Re: normal

Post by the mingo » August 10th, 2017, 3:21 pm

I've jumped from the rim
into the canyon to see if I could fly
and how did that hallowed theory work out ? was it exclusive, modern, when you came down to scald the taboo were you furry
or axiomatic in vehement aftermath ? I love this shit even though there is no cellar under my place - just sitting on top of the earth and smiling - good poem enjoyed
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: normal

Post by mnaz » August 13th, 2017, 10:08 pm

because he could?

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Re: normal

Post by saw » August 14th, 2017, 11:20 am

enjoyed the comments gents
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: normal

Post by WIREMAN » August 16th, 2017, 3:25 pm

fly Steve fly!!!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: normal

Post by sasha » August 17th, 2017, 12:02 pm

normal is wherever the water seeks its own level
it's the channel it finds on its own
the path it takes trickling downhill
no one can decide for it
but it
play your bass
ride your bike
twist your wires
because you cannot
not
to resist
to conform
to abstain
is UNnatural
.
"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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mnaz
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Re: normal

Post by mnaz » August 18th, 2017, 2:04 am

Normal is boring as hell maybe?
(The easy stock answer that's been around for a looong time now...)
Yet it's so appealing at times.. Funny.

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Re: normal

Post by justwalt » August 18th, 2017, 6:42 pm

It's all so clear now, thankx
many is a word

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