In The Shadow Of The Hawk

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beekaay
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In The Shadow Of The Hawk

Post by beekaay » September 14th, 2017, 4:02 pm

Laboring forward, upward, pace-driven, pack-heavy,
Heat relentless from the summer sun,
Rock walls aglow, chapparal smelling of flame.
My body struggles to fulfill my fantasy
Of a cooling rain still a hundred seasons away....

Less wise than the aging machine that houses me,
I go up, each foothold in each rock
A challenge, a small victory.

Then a shadow crosses me, bringing for an instant
A glacial coolness and silence to this tormented canyon.
Looking up, I see the hawk, circling slowly,
As if to say, "Go on, friend. I will keep watch."

And I smile as a cool breeze comes down the canyon,
A gift,
Lifting my soul and my pack.
Muscles and tendons past their prime
Grow suddenly young again
As this song grows in my heart
And feeds my strength.

And I walk, walk free
In the shadow of the hawk.

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Re: In The Shadow Of The Hawk

Post by creativesoul » September 15th, 2017, 12:38 am

Marvelous! Invigorating- loved it!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: In The Shadow Of The Hawk

Post by Ann Bingham » September 18th, 2017, 9:44 pm

Sorry, but first thought, I am so afraid of falling. Loved the imagery.

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Re: In The Shadow Of The Hawk

Post by creativesoul » September 26th, 2017, 10:06 am

Nice walk about
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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