As If Living

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mtmynd
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As If Living

Post by mtmynd » October 5th, 2017, 12:53 am

As If Living
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Confounded by indifference
the spell, the smell, the well
dug into deeper rock lain bare
longer than life itself … but!
it all was born of sense on fire;

Dupree ordered gates shut tight
as the air-borne flea circus
juggled the aromas of yesterday
not caring one iota of any hope
for gleaming future imaginings;

Betrayal must have reason to take
time to utter the sound – 'ut' - 'ter'
drawn in eclipses from beyond,
the comprehension of mind
whittles away at bark inlay...chipchip;

The sneeze captured in a moment
of seconds for the hungry mouths,
who have no jury to pass judgement
upon their willingnes to scream at
...at...at those who chose to play dead;

Miracles were devised by necessity,
Solar Systems in the billions spin
in unison around the mysterious un-
known as sun, sol, spinning eternal
as soul could possibly comprehend;

Toss it all into a fable written in signs
that stare back at the reader and guffaw
bringing confusion to the other wise one
standing in the blackened shadows
chuckling… gleefully… as if living.

[no know better (to) better know no]

___________
mtmynd aka
Cecil B. Lee
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creativesoul
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Re: As If Living

Post by creativesoul » October 6th, 2017, 1:04 am

Unreal! Great!
I'm truly stoked on this poem
Maybe even a little jealous
It's hot
Don't stop
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

mtmynd
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Re: As If Living

Post by mtmynd » October 8th, 2017, 4:12 pm

creativesoul wrote:
October 6th, 2017, 1:04 am
Unreal! Great!
I'm truly stoked on this poem
Maybe even a little jealous
It's hot
Don't stop
Many thanks, creativesoul! :D
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