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creativesoul
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Atrium assisted living

Post by creativesoul » October 20th, 2017, 8:45 pm

Desperate to find a house
Away from room mates
Jumped on a sweet little severities house
With a yard and covered area
For my kind and devoted dog
Being able to toss a frisbee
Out the door at four in the morning
Is a beautiful thing

It's Friday
Behind the house
Is the kitchen for assisted living
Today is Friday: it smells like fish
In the morning it smells like bacon
I love it
I am not sure the dog does
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Atrium assisted living

Post by mnaz » October 21st, 2017, 7:51 am

The dog wants it!

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Post by creativesoul » October 21st, 2017, 11:23 am

The gray matter
Of the grandmother
Was filled with cheese
And cracker from one drink at cocktail hour
For forty years

My generation was hugging the loud speakers on l s d
Now : 50% deaf I will get hearing aids in one week
Granny had heard enough
Threw hers away at 91
So much vision she had
Dancing and excercising for 50 years
At y m c a - college of the desert:
She had that hippo campus brain moving
But somehow
System said " over it " check out time
Alzhiemers is sad
Grandma was not in there anymore
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Atrium assisted living

Post by Doreen Peri » October 21st, 2017, 4:34 pm

Sounds really nice!

But what's a severities house?

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Post by creativesoul » October 24th, 2017, 9:04 pm

70s ok- no stainless steel applicances
Just white , little wooden cabinets
With a covered area where I am be Georgia o keef
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » October 24th, 2017, 9:08 pm

Transformation occurs at odd times in the sandy places
Larger than life rocks and shadows
The sky whispers stories of days gone by
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Atrium assisted living

Post by stilltrucking » November 3rd, 2017, 9:55 am

Thank you for the poem. Reminded me of this one from Zlatko the Waterman
The Aegis


is a fancy nursing home where
the walls are glass
and the columns are twittered with
rose plaster and goldfinches.
Every room has a window and is a real winner.
Winches, belt-thin, hoist
the ruined flanks to dinner.
A background of Haydn,
a foreground of porcelain bridges and
scooting replaced hips.
This is the finest chandelier light
glancing from Waterford goblets.
What’s in the basement?
More clean.
The bones are in the garden.


9/05

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Re: Atrium assisted living

Post by mtmynd » November 3rd, 2017, 2:32 pm

good reads abound from all
while i sit and absorb the
pleasantries of the aftermath.
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