Another New Proverb

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68degrees
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Another New Proverb

Post by 68degrees » October 25th, 2017, 10:07 am

Her crescent sleeping
face in early morn

holier than any sun
rise
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Re: Another New Proverb

Post by saw » October 26th, 2017, 9:39 am

it's difficult to use brevity in an ode....but, you did it...well done
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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68degrees
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Re: Another New Proverb

Post by 68degrees » November 22nd, 2017, 6:15 pm

saw wrote: ↑
October 26th, 2017, 9:39 am
 it's difficult to use brevity in an ode....but, you did it...well done
Thanks...appreciate the words.
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