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par

Posted: February 7th, 2018, 9:55 am
by saw
variations of orange like this
can only be seen in the fire
but never stop trying to mix
the perfect shade of tangerine

the mind is a hungry child
determined to cry and scream
if its needs aren't met in the push and pull
of sentient vibrations

ah yes my friends, existential tug-o-war
try to focus on the knot in the line
dreams dashed and reborn,
each and every day is a jack-in-the-box

a goofy tune
with an occasional spring up the ass
oh c'mon. surely my language doesn't offend you
I suppose I could pretend if you like

so sorry my stoicism has gone flat
my apologies it isn't up to par,
by the way.............what is par
on this course ?


1-21-18

Re: par

Posted: February 7th, 2018, 9:01 pm
by stilltrucking
muchas gracias 8)




five days a week
eight hours a day
I set in shower booth with blue curtains
and listen to the children cry
Outside of a pediatrician's office I don't know where you can find more crying children than at a Walleyworldâ„¢

I listen to them and think to myself , you are damn right kid, you got a raw deal
go moan for mankind.

jack in the box
hippies look good in the box

nothing to do with your poem
I just got fixated on those hungry children :oops:

Re: par

Posted: February 9th, 2018, 8:20 am
by the mingo
* 8) *

Re: par

Posted: February 9th, 2018, 11:04 am
by Arcadia
mostly a question... :lol: :lol: :lol:

always enjoying your poems, saw! gracias!!!!

Re: par

Posted: February 12th, 2018, 8:26 am
by WIREMAN
Some course par is all u need 😎

Re: par

Posted: February 12th, 2018, 9:28 am
by saw
thanx ladies and germs
always great to hear from you