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flex time

Posted: March 14th, 2018, 7:27 am
by saw
no electricity this morning
the coleman lantern lights my fantasy
no computer, no tv, no radio
not enough good light to paint
but here on the sun-porch
even on this drizzly beginning
I can write myself
like a ship listing to starboard
I am compelled
to accept....my power
has nothing to do with electricity

Re: flex time

Posted: March 14th, 2018, 9:52 am
by sasha
a listing ship writing itself - nice allusion, nice pun! & the poem's message is quietly true.

Re: flex time

Posted: March 17th, 2018, 9:42 am
by mtmynd
Re: "...my power has nothing to do with electricity."

Knowing that plugs one into True Self.

Re: flex time

Posted: March 20th, 2018, 2:58 am
by mnaz
This climate thing seems to be going wacky, but maybe it's always been like that..

Re: flex time

Posted: March 22nd, 2018, 7:13 am
by saw
was just reading the poem and comments and spotted careless typo
funny thing is I had already read it about fifty times