Jack and the Horse

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WIREMAN
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Jack and the Horse

Post by WIREMAN » March 27th, 2018, 9:55 pm

........a few years back
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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Jack and the Horse

Post by mtmynd » March 27th, 2018, 11:59 pm

the poetry of emotions
bathed in light and color
the named strengthened
as your words speak
speak in jazz rhythms
like Miles blows his horn
and everyone stops...
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Re: Jack and the Horse

Post by the mingo » March 28th, 2018, 5:30 am

Wild Tao -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Jack and the Horse

Post by saw » March 28th, 2018, 7:59 am

8) 8) 8) 8)
nice riff.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Jack and the Horse

Post by WIREMAN » March 28th, 2018, 4:50 pm

Thanks mi amigos😎
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Jack and the Horse

Post by mnaz » April 1st, 2018, 6:51 pm

Nice jazz riffs. Jack came down from the mountain. Never forget that part where the storm/fog lifts on his first summit morning, and he's shocked by the sight of Hozomeen rising into space... I gotta read that part again...

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