Air, Air

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mtmynd
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Air, Air

Post by mtmynd » July 15th, 2018, 2:16 pm

~-Air-~

Air is everywhere...
every-here-where.
It may not be
way up there...
but here is where
air is not so rare.

Air, air, o! everywhere
suspends the earth,
the moon, without care.
Air, air, spins the cosmos
it even suspends my hair!
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Allow not destiny to intrude upon Now

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mnaz
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Re: Air, Air

Post by mnaz » July 17th, 2018, 3:46 am

Air is why (I'm tempted to) believe in a "God with a Plan." At first glance the odds against it (air) seem astronomical in this solar "system" where for millions and millions of miles no other planet has it. But then I think of how unfathomably large space really is and I wonder..

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Re: Air, Air

Post by saw » July 17th, 2018, 9:30 am

we are a speck in the ocean
there are more complexes of galaxies than there are stars in our galaxy and there are 10 to the tenth billion stars in our galaxy....I can't even conceive such vastness
I do like my air....
for my hair
it's getting too late
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Terri
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Re: Air, Air

Post by Terri » July 17th, 2018, 9:58 am

made me think of the old talking heads song

"Air...Air
It can break your heart
So remember when the weather gets rough
(You'll say to yourself)
What is happening to my skin?
Where is that protection that I needed?
Air can hurt you too
Air can hurt you too
Some people say not to worry about the air
Some people don't know shit about the...
Air..."

i like your spin better
i'm pretty fond of air, myself

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Re: Air, Air

Post by mtmynd » July 17th, 2018, 1:29 pm

TY, all!
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