Dawn in My Hair

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the mingo
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Dawn in My Hair

Post by the mingo » August 26th, 2018, 6:57 am

awake before dawn
rain -

I step to the porch
hear the rain hitting every leaf
in the forest

look below me
see the dark water in the river

- for some reason
I feel like
Doc Holliday in Japan
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Dawn in My Hair

Post by saw » August 26th, 2018, 8:13 am

better than Kenny Rogers..... 8)

although many forget he was part of the First Edition

https://www.google.com/search?q=just+dr ... e&ie=UTF-8

gotta love it
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Dawn in My Hair

Post by creativesoul » August 26th, 2018, 3:33 pm

That sounds great- the rain.. and doc holiday - nice/
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Dawn in My Hair

Post by the mingo » August 28th, 2018, 3:12 am

better than Kenny Rogers..... 8)
I read this while eating slices of sandwich cheese spread with peanut butter - I fold each slice into itself like a burrito -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Dawn in My Hair

Post by the mingo » August 28th, 2018, 3:14 am

creativesoul wrote:
August 26th, 2018, 3:33 pm
That sounds great- the rain.. and doc holiday - nice/
Thx Jana - appreciate it - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Dawn in My Hair

Post by creativesoul » October 15th, 2018, 11:28 pm

I like to listen to acoustic
Love to sing although
I think I got kicked out

Maybe some blues
But I still have
A rock and roll soul

I have had to learn
To let go


Tonight I am sure that at any moment I will start
The project laid on the dining room table
Or the canvas on the easel

The praying woman
On her kneees
With flamingo s behind her
I am not sure about the size
Of those birds in that painting

Pushing forward
I have a canvas painting with a gun glued
In it🐹and a gas cap from ?
High voltage
And the woman that drops all her furniture
On me
And then went and lived with a troll

Wow- what a woman will tolerate-
Certainly it is not so easy inbtge world
But selling my soul
Was not part of that agreement
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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