Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

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the mingo
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Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by the mingo » August 30th, 2018, 5:26 am

because his exhaust system
is worn and loose
every time Sonny lets off the gas
the whole system rattles
he's out there running around to be cool, right?
zoom & zip & swish
but then he takes his foot off the accelerator
and everybody laughs
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by saw » August 31st, 2018, 1:44 pm

life is all around us
when our ears and eyes are open.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by creativesoul » August 31st, 2018, 2:17 pm

I have been in a car like this
I like it
Where is he going?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by the mingo » August 31st, 2018, 10:36 pm

Thx again, saw 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by the mingo » August 31st, 2018, 10:37 pm

Sonny ain't going anywhere, Jana, he's just doing it to be seen doing it - Thx for the read 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by creativesoul » August 31st, 2018, 11:11 pm

I love your writing
But you make the mind wander
Which is what makes your bike rides and wood chopping
Interesting
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by the mingo » September 1st, 2018, 8:28 pm

creativesoul wrote:
August 31st, 2018, 11:11 pm
I love your writing
But you make the mind wander
Which is what makes your bike rides and wood chopping
Interesting
Thank You, Jana - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by creativesoul » September 3rd, 2018, 8:45 am

Anyway the moon has spoken again
Once again
All the people are sleeping
The coffee is absolutely fabulous
Blessings mungo
M I n g o
Auto write/ correct makes everything dialects
I knew a linguist once
He invented ski s for kids with orthopedic problems
I love people that have a vision
And go fo it
Go for it- let those fingers loose
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by creativesoul » September 3rd, 2018, 8:45 am

Anyway the moon has spoken again
Once again
All the people are sleeping
The coffee is absolutely fabulous
Blessings mungo
M I n g o
Auto write/ correct makes everything dialects
I knew a linguist once
He invented ski s for kids with orthopedic problems
I love people that have a vision
And go fo it
Go for it- let those fingers loose
The car that an x husband had in my dream last night
All dented and his usual parade of entertainment
But the rodeo clowns had found him
All gored by the buffalo
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Some Great Shit Right Here & No Money

Post by creativesoul » September 3rd, 2018, 8:48 am

The buffalo have to roam
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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