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giving it a go

Posted: September 14th, 2018, 3:38 pm
by saw
toes in the sands of time
a rogue wave crosses my life
like a chance meeting with destiny
and I am immersed in all the possibilities
that come with the long distance rattle
of old photographs and letters, keepsakes
and seashells in a box of cardboard dreams
long forgotten in the ravages of wrinkles
and scars from the razor sharp bites
of the barracudas, moray eels, the
red snappers of ancient love affairs,
the good, the bad, and the ugly truth
of experimentation and shots fired
from the curvaceous hips that lead a man in
and it ain't nobody's fault and no one gets the credit
it's just what people do, one foot in front of the next
one leg at a time as we slip into the denim jeans
of giving it a go
here on this marvelous spinning orb
with few answers and many mysteries.

Re: giving it a go

Posted: September 15th, 2018, 12:20 am
by judih
once we put on the jeans
we're bravely on our way

love this write, saw. hope the journey offers fruit

Re: giving it a go

Posted: September 15th, 2018, 1:25 am
by saw
thank you judih....

Re: giving it a go

Posted: September 15th, 2018, 6:16 am
by creativesoul
Blue jean baby
Ya it’s all in the steps
Preparing for the moment
Of complete transformation
Not everyone craves that
Artists need that- cocoon butterfly thing
I think
I feel
Lovers are confusing
The memorial to a time gone by
Sometimes I mourn for that love
Or try a new way
That is daredevil beware
Ha ha ha
Great spirit is a comedian

Re: giving it a go

Posted: September 21st, 2018, 7:50 pm
by saw
yes great spirit is indeed a jokester