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distant poet

Posted: September 19th, 2018, 12:32 pm
by saw
reading his words
the genius born from being
on the outside from day one
a lonely wanderer with a huge
tormented heart and a prophetic urge
to connect...
some people just don't fit
the proverbial round peg
searching far and wide
for a round hole, but all
you find are the god damned squares
the unperceptive zombies
that walk in and out, like
they're walking onto a movie set
the apricot scarf type with fake tans
and extra white teeth that glow in the dark
and they can't see you, even
when you're in their way, and so
you pull out your pen and your junk mail
envelopes to conserve notebook paper, and you
pour it out, again and again, night after night
and the catalog of broken dreams would grow
'tween those moments of brilliant humor
and biting observations, and I'm reading
your life like never before, and I wish you
were still here, so we could make some trouble.

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 19th, 2018, 4:20 pm
by sasha
 

oh yeah - rage against the machine.....

saw wrote:
September 19th, 2018, 12:32 pm
...and so
you pull out your pen and your junk mail
envelopes to conserve notebook paper....
or those "This page left blank" sheets the elephantine financial institutions mail out by the metric ton - for scribbled ideas, calculations, or just because I'm a cheap bastard

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 19th, 2018, 9:56 pm
by judih
make some trouble
in my name
while i watch my back

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 20th, 2018, 3:23 pm
by creativesoul
Quite brilliant- that whole moment when you find that solution
Scribbled on midnight madness

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 20th, 2018, 3:24 pm
by creativesoul
Diana Ross sings: “ it’s all right and it’s coming to n- got to get right back to where we started from...”

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 20th, 2018, 3:24 pm
by creativesoul
Diana Ross sings: “ it’s all right and it’s coming to n- got to get right back to where we started from...”

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 20th, 2018, 3:25 pm
by creativesoul
Love is good
Love can be strong

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 21st, 2018, 12:35 pm
by saw
sasha. judih. jana....thank you

Re: distant poet

Posted: September 30th, 2018, 12:51 pm
by mtmynd
Wonderful piece you've spun for the reader, SAW, and one that does justice to the subject now passed but not to be forgotten.

Excellent!

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 24th, 2018, 2:51 pm
by saw
anyone that wants a copy of Dino's poetry book let me know
his sister has copies...I'll be the middle man in getting a copy to you....

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 24th, 2018, 4:51 pm
by creativesoul
I want one!!

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 25th, 2018, 1:10 pm
by saw
private message your address jana...and I'll send you one

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 25th, 2018, 11:58 pm
by creativesoul
Thank you

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 26th, 2018, 12:01 am
by creativesoul
I am stuck on stupid on private messages here
So I’ll send it on Facebook- ok?

Re: distant poet

Posted: October 26th, 2018, 12:27 pm
by saw
ok, Jana