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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » September 24th, 2018, 5:57 am

The sleep took me
Moon woke me up
Lit a candle
It gave a large flame
For desire
Under the moon ;put it in the yard

Cedar chips
Cable table
Radio oon back porch
Frisbee dog
What else could a girl want?

Me
I dunno
Might paint or write
I had hash browns
Eggswake up go there o the gym

Don’t ask
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: Girl

Post by saw » October 20th, 2018, 10:00 am

nice economy
says what it needs to
quite well
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

creativesoul
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Re: Girl

Post by creativesoul » October 20th, 2018, 10:37 am

Thanks
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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