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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » October 1st, 2018, 12:20 pm

The sun rises
In the east corner
Of my little yard

Today : windows open
Papayas growing

Basil - green and aromatic
I love the rake I got

The yard and my touch on the great Mother Earth
I wanted to care for a small piece of land

At night
The assisted living place
Behind me
We dream together

As they are wise
And close to dismissal

I feel beautiful
In
My five dollar dress
Cut off shorts

Please laugh at me
Because I’m funny

I’m giving birth to a baby
Made of ice cream
There are glazed doughnuts
Dancing
In my eyes
Chocolate slides in front of me
In caramel
Drenched in pleasant tastes

The sounds of the fans
Moving the air around
Feels so good
I do not dare make a sound
Winter in the desert is here
The moments we have been waiting for

I will join the little old ladies at the aquatic center
I will do laps
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by judih » October 1st, 2018, 10:41 pm

a wonderful write, jana!

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Post by saw » October 2nd, 2018, 8:41 am

poetic honesty captured
and there is real beauty in a humble life
when one can see the nuances....wonderful piece, jana
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by creativesoul » October 12th, 2018, 1:04 am

Thank you so much....-()()()((()))) blessings to you all-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by stilltrucking » October 12th, 2018, 2:55 pm

that poem is a real beauty
thank you for writing it.

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