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saw
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blue aura avatars

Post by saw » October 14th, 2018, 3:40 pm

take another piece
of my heart now baby
i trust you will nurture it
keep it safe.....Faith
is all I got and I gotta tell ya
I'm pretty fucking sick of betrayal,
nibble my wares
blend the atoms
taste the hard honesty, the salt
of an old weathered sailor....
I am the hardtack of a thousand lifetimes
the sustenance for seekers of contentment
one part sugar, three parts lime,
I am the universal soldier
the simplest man on a block of idiots
swallow my karma....wash it down
with Bulliet Rye over ice cubes
I am everything
nothing
a dot....an isle on a map of the ocean
a single star in Andromeda
a single puzzle piece in a constellation
lost on the floor of time
among the dust bunnies and dog hair,
throw away those silly fears
settle into this very moment
take a little bite,
I am wandering love
I am a man
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by creativesoul » October 14th, 2018, 8:05 pm

Beautiful- I think that might be pretty interesting-in being a man and spiritual and strong
Betrayal
Mmmm I guess I could comment about that -
Cowboys in my belly with a bowl
Of chilli I made myself

Betrayal is like erosion
It begins as a trickle
And then the final deluge
No bandaids will fix the wound
Except action
Pointing your nose in a new direction smelling : as if for the first time-smelling the coffee-
Seeing that sculpture in the garden
That did not seem like it was there before
It it was
Kaleidoscope visions of rainbow light
Twirling me around without any fight

What was I expecting anyway?
Why was I hoping that trust
Would eliminate my mental baggage?
I cannot believe that this dream is to redemption
All the stuff is our intention
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by saw » October 19th, 2018, 8:33 pm

thanx for the response jana...mucho bueno
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by creativesoul » October 20th, 2018, 10:43 am

It is morning
I just had the only coffee I get
Had to tighten my leash
Drank coffee like a drunk
I love anything to much
And it’s beautiful hold on me
Will be challenged-
It is as if my Creator
Just keeps laughing
Ha ha ha ha
Don’t get too comfortable
Going to change again

Not sure if the realization
That I’m just ok
Is anything important
Yet but this comes from someone
That had known some dark times
Now the light bathes me in gold
My pain is gone
I walk like a champion
Ride my little bike with the dog running a long side
Animal control and me
Over the years.. dang
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by saw » October 26th, 2018, 3:21 pm

If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by stilltrucking » October 26th, 2018, 4:00 pm

blue aura avatars:
that is a pretty seductive poem 8)

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Re: blue aura avatars

Post by saw » November 4th, 2018, 7:01 am

appreciated the feedback truck

keep on a truckin' ! 8) 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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