discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

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mtmynd
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discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by mtmynd » October 18th, 2018, 10:33 pm

[pumped out of me head on 7.09.2006]

discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

corridors of blushed recollections
paled to a squint with eyes piercing
the only light from a candle's stub
held eye-level casting a suspicious
shadow upon crying walls -
tears from ages of neglect

enclosed within its own dungeon
the heart could easily be heard
were it not for the mind churning
cinematic madness of distorted views,
volume cranked higher than nimbus
becoming but a slave to the self

the mind has taken complete control
taken us places that we've never seen
places which enlarged our world
solidifying contact with humanity
their arts, their words,
their music, their lives

but as gautama - so did ourself
mind could not answer all
mind is built upon what it
has accumulated thru travel
in body, in mind, in spirit,
accumulation of our expansions
made heavy with the senses:
the holy five sensualities
demanding their needs
fulfilling their destiny
thru our ability to set free
and accept all that there is
thru the challenges of choice

the good becomes bad
the bad becomes good
and the journey of both
is the dance of the universe -
arm in arm the dualities waltz
the dance floor of the ethers
music of orchestra cosmosia
spinning in compositional precision

M A E S T R O !

if we come to know eternity
what is that - that knows?
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mtmynd aka Cecil B. Lee
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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by stilltrucking » October 18th, 2018, 11:41 pm

8) M A E S T R O !
if we come to know eternity
what is that - that knows?
beats me
“We are unknown, we knowers, to ourselves … ... to all eternity,"
The Genealogy Of Morals

very 8) poem
thank you for writing

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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by saw » October 19th, 2018, 1:24 pm

poem sounds really good read aloud with the emotion of a Shakespearean actor....the words are ready for the stage....great work..... 8) 8) 8)
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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by creativesoul » October 19th, 2018, 1:33 pm

Beautiful
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by mtmynd » October 24th, 2018, 10:49 pm

saw wrote:
October 19th, 2018, 1:24 pm
poem sounds really good read aloud with the emotion of a Shakespearean actor....the words are ready for the stage....great work..... 8) 8) 8)
Thank you, Steve. I appreciate it!
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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by creativesoul » October 25th, 2018, 1:54 am

That was a great write
I will light incense in your honor
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by mtmynd » October 26th, 2018, 2:50 pm

creativesoul wrote:
October 25th, 2018, 1:54 am
That was a great write
I will light incense in your honor
O my! "creativesoul" that was a comment that nudges on my ego... uncomfortably.

But I certainly am grateful that this piece has triggered these (3) replies. TYVM all!
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Re: discarding the slippers to reach the full moon

Post by creativesoul » October 27th, 2018, 12:51 am

It’s heavenly smoke rises
To where words materialize in the tips of fingers
The soul whispers on the strings of hidden heart
The places where spirit arouses
A sense of awe
Maybe intrigue
Melts away quickly
Like snow
Then ice ......water
But the fire
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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