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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » October 21st, 2018, 8:09 pm

He was diligently trying to find the
Allelle gene
If you have the d2 receptor
When you drink or use drugs
It goes BOOM SHUKa
Luka
None of this “ tippsy” thing
My crew did not tolerate puking
I come from a very long line of thirsty people
You must be able to “ handle”

My father is dead
My son is getting the picture
I could cry and yell at the star nation
But
He wrote a book
Left evidence to what a narassistic guy he was
I had to hear from him
I was two paragraphs
That just hurts all over again

I now know why I have an ice cream child
Seeking comfort in the arms of anyone that is warm
The tale that sits within me is a corn snake/ harmless
Beautiful colors- but - do not be fooled-
Each time the mouse is struggling
The snake breaks it’s neck by squeezing
Then swallowed it whole—
That story is ravenously waiting to be told- mostly because I’m not afraid of you anymore
You treated me like a whore
It embarrassed me for sure
I do t k ow if you know
But there is way more to love and family
Then what you show
I am relieved I don’t have to find compassion for you
You are done and gone
I miss Gordon
He knew
All about it
I just cannot continue to pretend
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by judih » October 21st, 2018, 10:25 pm

going deeper and deeper

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Post by the mingo » October 21st, 2018, 11:50 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by creativesoul » December 12th, 2018, 8:40 pm

Today: that moan that comes from
Knowing you will never see them again
Came out
Tears that do not ever mend fences
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by saw » December 13th, 2018, 10:26 am

some of my hardest lessons
the realization that some we'd like to get closer to
do not have the capacity nor desire for that
we chug along the tracks lookin' for that whistle stop of clarity
and the train just roars through the depot
leaving you on the platform wondering why
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by creativesoul » December 13th, 2018, 4:42 pm

Brilliant description
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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