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Post by the mingo » October 25th, 2018, 9:13 am

where the road's surface looks gray
the sky is gray too
the dog asks to go out
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by short timer » October 25th, 2018, 12:05 pm

thanks 8)

a dog on the bus
i reached down to pet him
and my hand came away with a stench

funny feeling
It was a party bus I was driving, converted school bus

still had the big mirror pointing down to the driver and passengers
they could see me I could see them
and I was thinking about how I looked—
had I committed a face crime?
I fumbled for the little bottle of hand sanitizer at the next light
wiped it all down


such a short sweet ku pome deserved a long ramble I thought :oops:
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Post by saw » October 26th, 2018, 12:30 pm

when you gotta go you gotta go
the dog don't give a fuck about the colors

remember the words of Frank Zappa
" Don't eat the yellow snow "'.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by the mingo » October 27th, 2018, 8:16 pm

Thx Jack 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by the mingo » October 27th, 2018, 8:17 pm

Thx saw 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by creativesoul » October 30th, 2018, 11:04 pm

I used to take my dog on the trolley in Portland
He was so well behaved no one asked if he was a service dog
I can look nuts in a heartbeat if you mess with my dog
I know that I come from a long line of dog lovers
There just is no one ever happier to see you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » October 30th, 2018, 11:05 pm

“Every time I go to town.. the boys start kicking my dog around “
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 3rd, 2018, 7:33 am

An illustration. I could see it.

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Post by the mingo » November 4th, 2018, 10:50 pm

Thx for reading and comment, doreen - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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