if not seen(exist?)

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sonofthesun
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if not seen(exist?)

Post by sonofthesun » November 6th, 2018, 4:25 am

to hold her to my breast
and call her little one,
it's a dream i shall reach,
no matter the pain,
life is infinite,
and I?
am patient.
There is no empty space
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Re: if not seen(exist?)

Post by stilltrucking » November 14th, 2018, 5:06 am

liked your poem a lot

I am still grateful I had that dream too.
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Re: if not seen(exist?)

Post by sonofthesun » December 13th, 2018, 6:08 am

thank you. not a bad dream
There is no empty space
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