win, lose or draw

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saw
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win, lose or draw

Post by saw » November 17th, 2018, 10:46 am

she said I want you to sketch me
in the chair, on the floor, across the sofa
and I said sure, do you have some outfits in mind ?
lingerie, formal attire

she said she'd rather be nude
so I sharpened my pencils in record time
but couldn't find a damn drawing tablet anywhere
though I knew I had a half a dozen in the house

so I grabbed a pad of graph paper
and began to put her body
into little blue squares, Bold Strokes
but not one was a straight line

No, all she had was curves
and she moved too much anyway
and she talked incessantly about politics
the weather, religion

I only caught a word here and there, it was
one of those one-sided conversations
because my mind was elsewhere, honestly
it was everywhere, that had nothing to do with talking

her voice was like an adult
in a Charlie Brown special. musically atonal
and she said, hey...you're not paying attention
and I replied, "The hell I'm not !"
Last edited by saw on November 19th, 2018, 9:01 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Terri
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Re: win, lose or draw

Post by Terri » November 17th, 2018, 4:51 pm

sometimes your eyes can take over
more often than not
or you wouldn't be describing blue grid paper

saw
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Re: win, lose or draw

Post by saw » November 19th, 2018, 9:02 am

thanx terri...just reread and was surprised to see all the typos....damn....my mind really was somewhere else... 8)
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Re: win, lose or draw

Post by mtmynd » November 19th, 2018, 2:01 pm

that which we find ourselves focused on often create the question "why?"
but the mind continues it's focus not offering answers...

fun read, SAW, ;)
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