trails of love

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saw
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trails of love

Post by saw » November 22nd, 2018, 9:31 am

searching for words
when the bridge is out
how do I span my consciousness

what detour works best
when a heart is sated to capacity
with feelings that beg for descriptions

I search the adjacent perimeters
believing i have missed something.....
cannot find a single reason to turn back

it's a remarkable day
when an old hiker can only see the future
in the arms of a goddess, a glorious step

into an unknown world over rivulets
that run wild with only the magic of nature's
ways of touching a man, wordless

it might appear, yet voices speak
in pure radiant energy, expanding the mind
with glowing orbs of orange, sage, olive

emerald, mint. sea foam,
her everlasting colors of love in winter
when mere words fall short
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: trails of love

Post by creativesoul » November 22nd, 2018, 2:05 pm

Wow/ saw my heart in two!
Amazing writing
- love is a mystery
You make it seem interesting
Great descriptions
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: trails of love

Post by mtmynd » November 22nd, 2018, 10:03 pm

fine piece you've written, SAW... a real keeper.
Salud!
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Re: trails of love

Post by judih » November 23rd, 2018, 12:23 am

arms of goddess!
paintings and melodies
wrap your moments

saw
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Re: trails of love

Post by saw » November 24th, 2018, 9:12 am

thanx much dear colleagues...thankful this holiday for all ya'all.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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