Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

she came to me
with him
who had hit her
asking me to give in
sorry
not going to happen
it doesnt work that way

she came to me
with him . . .


only 28 words in your poem including the title
you used them well!!!

Thank you for the poem

I was young once
now I am old
I keep hoping for a chance at one more broken heart.

Not sure what it is, but I enjoy using as few of words as possible. Never too late for another broken heart, that is what makes life worth living. Each sunrise has a new tale.

Certain things are not forgiven easily----domestic violence is surely one of them. Too many women (mostly) are killed or really hurt by some guy who can't control his worst instincts. It just isn't right.

It destroyed me for 4 years afterwards