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Ridiculous

Post by Doreen Peri » December 23rd, 2018, 3:44 am

The entire effort is ridiculous.
Who has time for this?

Are you serious? I mean, for REAL?
It's an absolutely stupidly ubiquitous
nonsensical effort spent by some. Or one.
What do you FEEL about it?

But whatever the endeavor, the honest, heartfelt
effort was the most important part, I imagine.
Or something similar, whatever the cards have dealt
for your costume fashion.

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Re: Ridiculous

Post by Doreen Peri » December 23rd, 2018, 6:24 am

Great rhythm. And it rhymes too 😀

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Re: Ridiculous

Post by saw » December 23rd, 2018, 12:03 pm

yes, as important as the product, is the endeavor
when one sets aside time for writing, art, music ,dance
they come as close to a heavenly spirit as is possible
watching tv....for the most part....allows little chance to touch the divine
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Ridiculous

Post by Doreen Peri » December 24th, 2018, 1:39 am

It's all truly ridiculous.

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 24th, 2018, 4:50 pm

saw wrote:
December 23rd, 2018, 12:03 pm
yes, as important as the product, is the endeavor
when one sets aside time for writing, art, music ,dance
they come as close to a heavenly spirit as is possible
watching tv....for the most part....allows little chance to touch the divine
Yes, this is true! :D

It's a noble, fun, and creative spiritual effort, somehow touching the divine .... despite being rather ridiculous. Haha :D

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Re: Ridiculous

Post by Doreen Peri » December 24th, 2018, 5:21 pm

I'm just kidding. It's not ridiculous at all. :)

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