Late night thinking

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creativesoul
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Late night thinking

Post by creativesoul » February 8th, 2019, 6:26 am

I think of the day
That passed before me
I fell asleep again moi moi
At sunset
Waking with the age cramping in my ankles
The dog : licks my feet and a wound from gardening
Careless with my red rake :
Dates and helicopter leaves

The hummingbirds grace my shanty
I bring them red sugar water in feeders
Who am I to judge anyone crazy before teaching
Art tommorow- I just decided to have art sessions here

The world opened up
My heart follows the color
The vibration sometimes meditation
Is more reality than where we live r
This planet is a beautiful place

I feel the healing in my body
I lit a candle for Jesus
I watch t v and hope for sleep
It does not work

It appears that there is something
I have to do
Tugging on my dress like a small child

Desires of a the young woman became my elderly gold
Friends I love young and old
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Late night thinking

Post by saw » February 8th, 2019, 10:29 am

enjoyed the wanderings of an artist-citizen-of-the-world
aging woman as compared to the wide eyes of the girl
the ever changing metamorphosis of discerning what to leave in and what to leave out... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Late night thinking

Post by creativesoul » February 8th, 2019, 3:54 pm

Thanks - I appreciate that..
Last night left me for sleep
Which handled me

The sun on my dogs fur
On
My face
I want to paint in the warmth of the sun by the window
It’s cold out
My snow bound hero’s
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Late night thinking

Post by theirishsea » February 9th, 2019, 1:06 am

I can picture the hummingbirds-----but in addition the poem is a mix of meditation---overcoming some aches and pains----and the joy of seeing the beauty of the planet. Sleep? Hopefully you can get what you need.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

creativesoul
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Re: Late night thinking

Post by creativesoul » February 9th, 2019, 1:39 pm

I guess
I do
Thank you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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