the big bang

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saw
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the big bang

Post by saw » February 18th, 2019, 1:03 pm

the poet's old tongue
laid out to squirm on the table

the paintbrush sharpened
like an ancient arrow, then shot

across the universe, the G string
stretched to capacity

it's the fire inside
that place you cannot put your fingers on

that dancing spark

the artist is a vessel
sailing on a sea of imagination

lapping waves with messages
in bottles of smooth green glass

it's the Infinite Jest
the tears of the ghosts

it has to happen

the elements always collide
the genius is in the respite

the ensuing explosion.......
the big bang
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: the big bang

Post by the mingo » February 18th, 2019, 2:12 pm

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Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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mnaz
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Re: the big bang

Post by mnaz » February 18th, 2019, 11:32 pm

the paintbrush or pen, or, or ... yes, you can't quite put a finger on those fires.

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Re: the big bang

Post by saw » March 9th, 2019, 12:06 pm

thanx for the feedback
i was wandering the pages
like a man looking for a way out
there were walls of poems
built high, day after day
it was warm inside
I recognized some faces
my heart rate slowed down
my eyes dilated, my chest rose
kaboooooom
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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