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Whisperers

Posted: April 12th, 2019, 7:02 pm
by Doreen Peri
My pet peeve, she stated,
is overhearing whispering,
but only hearing the s’s.

But perhaps this is
what the whisperers
whispered,
I asserted:

“She's a sweetheart,
surely you should see that!
She shimmers sunshine,
showing sheer spontaneous superiority,
so smart, so sophisticated, so spry,
so special, so sassy, so scintillating!
Shhhhh... squelch the idea of a
shy sanctimonious stunner!
She is awesome!”

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 13th, 2019, 9:39 am
by saw
super savvy and sophisticated... 8)

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 13th, 2019, 9:53 am
by mtmynd
Hell YES!

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 16th, 2019, 1:03 pm
by the mingo
Yeah, but ... <* 8) *>

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 17th, 2019, 3:02 am
by mnaz
Yeah that ess sound ...

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 18th, 2019, 5:15 pm
by theirishsea
Terrific poem. Love the whispering sibilants. And it is emotional sunshine.

Re: Whisperers

Posted: April 21st, 2019, 1:57 am
by Doreen Peri
So sorry I’m so scatterbrained, I somehow missed sending my thanks for your support and special responses. ❤️