LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

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mtmynd
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LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Post by mtmynd » April 26th, 2019, 6:14 pm

LOVE behaving like wingless beasts under passion torn clouds


L O V E
angelizing
its wings
flotation devices
suspending reality
in the essences
floral goodness
elevating high,
higher, highest.
risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,
L O V E
made solid like marble
rolling sideways
across the bed of ideals.
do not forget
forgiveness mends
the highlights of
fantasy, a tad askew.

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Cecil B. Lee
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mnaz
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Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Post by mnaz » April 27th, 2019, 7:34 pm

The bed of ideals. I'd like to sleep on that.

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Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Post by saw » April 28th, 2019, 11:15 am

forgiveness is a major step toward the light of love
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Post by theirishsea » May 4th, 2019, 3:21 pm

LOVE/angelizing/its wings----------great start to the poem. And this:

risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,

and the ending on a bed of ideals----really a nice inventive poem.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

mtmynd
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Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Post by mtmynd » May 5th, 2019, 12:47 am

theirishsea wrote:
May 4th, 2019, 3:21 pm
LOVE/angelizing/its wings----------great start to the poem. And this:

risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,

and the ending on a bed of ideals----really a nice inventive poem.
Mant thanks, TIS... appreciated.
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