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LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Posted: April 26th, 2019, 6:14 pm
by mtmynd
LOVE behaving like wingless beasts under passion torn clouds


L O V E
angelizing
its wings
flotation devices
suspending reality
in the essences
floral goodness
elevating high,
higher, highest.
risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,
L O V E
made solid like marble
rolling sideways
across the bed of ideals.
do not forget
forgiveness mends
the highlights of
fantasy, a tad askew.

__________
Cecil B. Lee

Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Posted: April 27th, 2019, 7:34 pm
by mnaz
The bed of ideals. I'd like to sleep on that.

Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Posted: April 28th, 2019, 11:15 am
by saw
forgiveness is a major step toward the light of love

Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Posted: May 4th, 2019, 3:21 pm
by theirishsea
LOVE/angelizing/its wings----------great start to the poem. And this:

risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,

and the ending on a bed of ideals----really a nice inventive poem.

Re: LOVE behaving like wingless beasts

Posted: May 5th, 2019, 12:47 am
by mtmynd
theirishsea wrote:
May 4th, 2019, 3:21 pm
LOVE/angelizing/its wings----------great start to the poem. And this:

risque encounters
adrift with passions
set fire, breathing
living dragons copulate
in the skies darkened
by veils of clouds,

and the ending on a bed of ideals----really a nice inventive poem.
Mant thanks, TIS... appreciated.