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Adrenaline

Posted: June 2nd, 2019, 1:15 am
by creativesoul
I guess a girl like me
Couldn’t drink without having a problem
Did coffee of various types in northwest Oregon

I was told I was operating on “ false fire “ energy which is basicly “ sugar “..
I had to learn to eat broccoli and salmon
Made tofu my friend
It’s taken forever to get here

I believe adrenaline has saved my ass on numerous occasions
In the grandma club now
Ya got to act fast sometimes
Getting fragile in my old age
Happy to be meeting 4 and 8 year olds - and a good happy family

Re: Adrenaline

Posted: June 2nd, 2019, 2:13 pm
by theirishsea
I like the ending----got to act fast meeting 4 & 8 yr olds----and what made me smile---"a good happy family."

Re: Adrenaline

Posted: June 18th, 2019, 9:43 pm
by creativesoul
Thank you for your input- I like it

Re: Adrenaline

Posted: June 19th, 2019, 11:42 am
by saw
I like the brevity
just enough to say a lot
it's compact with poetic muscle