Wolf Talk
Wolf Talk
If I wrote a poem right now
it would look like a dog sleeping
and dreaming about something that made her
chase after it
the dog would wake up
I would give her a MilkBone
which she carries out into the living room
and begins to break it up
the sound of her teeth doing that
drifts into the room where I sit listening to a guy
with white hair speaking to someone I can't see
about another guy who is dead
the sound of all that would be the talk of wolves
it would look like a dog sleeping
and dreaming about something that made her
chase after it
the dog would wake up
I would give her a MilkBone
which she carries out into the living room
and begins to break it up
the sound of her teeth doing that
drifts into the room where I sit listening to a guy
with white hair speaking to someone I can't see
about another guy who is dead
the sound of all that would be the talk of wolves
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: Wolf Talk
Brautiganese perfectly done, El Mingo.
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love it
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Brilliant
one of the best things I've read from anyone in a long while
one of the best things I've read from anyone in a long while
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Aooooooouuuuuu well done!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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hit the spot
gonna get a re-hit, soon!
gonna get a re-hit, soon!
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Re: Wolf Talk
Nice one. Just the right length too. I can hear that crunch of a milkbone----can see and hear the white-haired guy talking into...……….
the talk of wolves------it is a great mind-stopping ending
the talk of wolves------it is a great mind-stopping ending
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Thx mtmynd,
Doreen,
saw,
Jana,
judih,
theirishsea -
Thank you all for your reads - appreciate it
Doreen,
saw,
Jana,
judih,
theirishsea -
Thank you all for your reads - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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