Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

If I wrote a poem right now
it would look like a dog sleeping
and dreaming about something that made her
chase after it

the dog would wake up
I would give her a MilkBone
which she carries out into the living room
and begins to break it up
the sound of her teeth doing that
drifts into the room where I sit listening to a guy
with white hair speaking to someone I can't see
about another guy who is dead

the sound of all that would be the talk of wolves

the mingo wrote: ↑

June 20th, 2019, 10:53 am

If I wrote a poem right now ...
the sound of all that would be the talk of wolves

Brautiganese perfectly done, El Mingo.

love it

Brilliant
one of the best things I've read from anyone in a long while

Aooooooouuuuuu well done!

hit the spot
gonna get a re-hit, soon!

Nice one. Just the right length too. I can hear that crunch of a milkbone----can see and hear the white-haired guy talking into...……….

the talk of wolves------it is a great mind-stopping ending

Thx mtmynd,
Doreen,
saw,
Jana,
judih,
theirishsea -

Thank you all for your reads - appreciate it