P.I.T.A.

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mtmynd
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P.I.T.A.

Post by mtmynd » August 5th, 2019, 5:33 pm

Expletive Heartbreak

Gotta pain up my semi colon
it left me in a comma,
I was having quotations:

Did she question mark
what happened between
the parentheses..?

She took a dash
up her colon that
left her apostrophe
dangling participles.

My exclamation point
was left italicized,
my heart in brackets.
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Allow not destiny to intrude upon Now

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mnaz
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Re: P.I.T.A.

Post by mnaz » August 6th, 2019, 1:39 am

Gotta leave vexations of mind
to those who lived before and
after Zen, the no-mind of mind.
It all makes no sense at all,
but obviously I'm confused.

theirishsea
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Re: P.I.T.A.

Post by theirishsea » August 11th, 2019, 11:31 pm

Love the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

mtmynd
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Re: P.I.T.A.

Post by mtmynd » August 12th, 2019, 12:00 am

theirishsea wrote:
August 11th, 2019, 11:31 pm
Love the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.
Many thanks, TIS! I was beginning to wonder if anyone would understand what I was doing. :)
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Re: P.I.T.A.

Post by saw » August 12th, 2019, 8:30 am

Punk Chew Ate,..... 8)

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