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P.I.T.A.

Posted: August 5th, 2019, 5:33 pm
by mtmynd
Expletive Heartbreak

Gotta pain up my semi colon
it left me in a comma,
I was having quotations:

Did she question mark
what happened between
the parentheses..?

She took a dash
up her colon that
left her apostrophe
dangling participles.

My exclamation point
was left italicized,
my heart in brackets.

Re: P.I.T.A.

Posted: August 6th, 2019, 1:39 am
by mnaz
Gotta leave vexations of mind
to those who lived before and
after Zen, the no-mind of mind.
It all makes no sense at all,
but obviously I'm confused.

Re: P.I.T.A.

Posted: August 11th, 2019, 11:31 pm
by theirishsea
Love the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.

Re: P.I.T.A.

Posted: August 12th, 2019, 12:00 am
by mtmynd
theirishsea wrote:
August 11th, 2019, 11:31 pm
Love the poem. Punctuates the punctuation with hitherto unforeseen meaning.
Many thanks, TIS! I was beginning to wonder if anyone would understand what I was doing. :)

Re: P.I.T.A.

Posted: August 12th, 2019, 8:30 am
by saw
Punk Chew Ate,..... 8)

clever