first there were doodles

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saw
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first there were doodles

Post by saw » August 18th, 2019, 9:42 am

first there were doodles
in the margins
and I studied them
for a period of time unknown to me
til they morphed into something
more congealed
scribbles of sand and portland
and water, into this block of experiences
these frozen molecules of stick figures
animated into something enjoyable
and when I look at it that way
I come to think that this is an exercise
in speaking a new language
which might actually be heard
by one soul out there
and wouldn't your mind be blown
as these maimed metaphors
grew some wings, wow
imagine that, simple lines
that could fly off the page...
land on the shoulder of a bored reader
invoking the goddess of healing old wounds
coming into this house
to join hands with the oracle of Delphi
the artistry would be nothing short of magic....
first there were doodles
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: first there were doodles

Post by mnaz » August 19th, 2019, 12:39 pm

Like this. Maimed metaphors, or even "invented" ones? growing wings ..
Can artistic creation still move us? Shape us? Connect us?..

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Re: first there were doodles

Post by saw » August 25th, 2019, 7:33 am

thanx man....may we all doodle our self into something spectacular ... 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: first there were doodles

Post by mnaz » August 26th, 2019, 1:43 pm

Absolutely. And may they, and the ideas/interior scenes they inspire, take on new lives of their own...

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Re: first there were doodles

Post by creativesoul » August 30th, 2019, 1:12 pm

Doodles saved me from endless wordy speeches from educators
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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