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Poem

Posted: August 23rd, 2019, 7:55 am
by theirishsea
I'm writing my dream on Kleenex.
It will be crumbled in the bathroom waste can.
Outside the wind is talking to a neighbor.
The lawn crew down the street is talking to no one.
The shadows of trees are on many lawns.
The dark night is riding in a carriage
jostling, clacking, shuddering, behind curtains.
There is nothing to feel, not even boredom.
The wind begins with empty movement, then grabs
a wisp of smoke, a high up leaf detaching,
a brazen bit of speculation,
while I look in the mirror, examine my left eye,
find a pimple on my nose, a bit of blood
on my lips; a body is such a disparaging thing.
I dream when I close my eyes and float
like a cloud above the day, below the moon.
Everything glows with expectation, meaning,
but you, who are busy tidying up your own dreams,
don't care.....

Re: Poem

Posted: August 24th, 2019, 12:39 am
by judih
The peaceful life
illusions on the half-shell
and then lunch

Re: Poem

Posted: August 24th, 2019, 5:11 pm
by mnaz
Nothing to feel (anymore?)
Modern times were going to change that,
but they just seem more of the same
shadows on lawns..

(Only a fraction of your Poem, I know..)

Re: Poem

Posted: August 25th, 2019, 7:18 am
by saw
but at least you are inspired enough to write a really good poem.....I like the journey....the everyday motion in any neighborhood and the coming to grips with aging and perhaps the loss of ambition....I really like it