this may be it
the brain arid, barren
my fingers ache
like over-stretched cells
from utter nonsensical scribbles
cramped too long
by the assumed position,
the spew today
will likely be a whisper
modest.......but....
there is something there
it's in the air
or somewhere unreachable
at this moment,
I cannot see it
but there is matter hiding
what matter ?
perhaps phrased more aptly
as... does it ?.... matter....at all ?
with all it's arcane volume
its secret atoms
its clandestine subatomic particles
fallacious gases,
confidential liquids
I KNOW......
you are there
in some ungodly form
a blackened ore ready to be tapped,
a patient geyser for a determined poet
( such as myself )...an old spelunker
OK OK
I'll stop writing for now, digging
but I know you are there
I can feel you
on the edge of greatness
on the edge of greatness
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: on the edge of greatness
Good work. Damn good!
You DID feel it! And you WROTE it!
You DID feel it! And you WROTE it!
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Re: on the edge of greatness
So close ...
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Re: on the edge of greatness
I guess when we are -always demonstrating a clarity
And ah ha moments-
Gentle medicine- emotional renovation
Is so nourishing
With this spark I am charged up to relieve the pressure
And ah ha moments-
Gentle medicine- emotional renovation
Is so nourishing
With this spark I am charged up to relieve the pressure
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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